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Summer’s heating up in the streets and in the box office. Johnny Depp and his pirates have blown the competition out of the water, while sweltering heat has swept across the nation. So turn on the air-condition, create some goals for yourself, and sit down to write the original, innovative masterpiece that will make all the difference in your career. |
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Big Updates For
Scriptshark Clients!
2005’s Scriptshark Insider Competition winner Nicole Jones has just signed with Metropolitan Talent’s Jennifer Good for representation. Her contest winning script, PRISON OF THE DAMNED, has been shopped around to high-profile production companies, one of which is now in final negotiations to acquire and produce it!
2006’s Scriptshark Insider Competition has concluded its submission stage, and is now promptly moving into the first of three judging stages. Results for the 2006 Scriptshark Insider Competition are expected to be announced in November 2006.
William Ward, writer of scouting-qualifier THE MOHAMAD EQUATION which tells the story of an unlikely friendship forged in an Iraqi prison, has been working with Blue Print’s Ryan Moore developing script concepts for his next screenplay, which Ryan would then take to market. William and Ryan met through ScriptShark’s scouting services. |
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Scriptshark.com offers its prestigious scouting services to screenplays that receive a CONSIDER or above through its coverage service. Qualifying screenplays are sent to approximately 15-20 reputable industry managers and agents in an attempt to secure the writer representation and pave inroads within the working industry. Scouting services are a direct channel to industry insiders. They are free of charge, and a reliable referral source of new material for representation executives.
The following scripts have recently received a CONSIDER through Scriptshark, and qualified for scouting services:
PRESIDENT 2200 by Jordan Fleming
Action/Sci-Fi
In the year 2200, Cmdr. Matt Eastman escapes the military officers working under the corrupt Earth president and undertakes a dangerous mission to save the true President and head off an inter-planetary conflict.
DELHI RAIN by Johannes Brinkmann
Thriller
An American cop has 24 hours to save his kidnapped sister in a foreign country, or she will be killed. The story is set against the rich landscape of India.
TILL NEXT TIME by Ivan Pestrikov
Erotic Drama
A dangerous love affair between a man and two women leads to their death - again and again.
CAUSE AND EFFECT by Phillip Baron
Adventure/Sci-Fi
A secret group manipulates events to make sure the future unfolds as it should, only to have the past and present be completely rewritten before their eyes…
COMFORT ZONE by Daniel Sanders
Romantic Comedy
A socially awkward, repressed young man falls in love with an uninhibited woman who teaches him to open up and accept himself.
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The Brass Ring: Getting an Agent
By Scriptshark Director, Lee Zahavi Jessup
The single most common question that Scriptshark gets from our writing customers eager to carve their path in the industry is: How do I get an agent? After all, agents and managers are the ones who will get your material read, put your screenplay in the hands of the industry’s all-powerful executives, and who will, ultimately, get you paid and set you on your professional Hollywood road to success. We hear this via email, at our speaking engagements, and during one-on-one writer’s consultations. Everyone wants to know: What is the best way to secure representation?
The first step to securing a reputable, effective Hollywood agent or manager is often the one most overlooked: Writing a strong, original, stand-out screenplay. In today’s market, saturated with hard-working aspiring screenwriters from all over the world, your screenplay has to stand out more than the rest. It can’t be as-good-as. It has to be better. The plot has to be smart, focused and tight. Your scenes, dialogue and characters must be well-thought-out and accordingly refined. And before you start sending it out, it is your responsibility to get your screenplay read by as many fellow writers, professional readers and other industry folk who would be willing to give, or sell, you their time. Don’t look to hear how brilliant your work is, or how close you are to becoming the next Ron Bass. Instead, try to learn what the detractors say, what is not working in the screenplay, and how others perceive your work. We often tell our writers: If you want to hear how talented you are, hand your screenplay to your best friend or your mother. If you want to become a working writer, get as much professional feedback on your screenplay as you can gather without sacrificing your chances with agents, managers and producers.
Therefore, we recommend that you never send a first draft out when seeking representation. Nor should you send out a draft that has only been read by a couple of friends (unless, of course, your friends are Callie Khouri or Akiva Goldsman). Instead, go to your local book store, pick up a screenwriting book, and consider whether you can make changes according to some of the book’s suggestions. Find writing seminars in your local community, and make sure to attend them and gather as many writing tips as you can. Or, better yet, attend a writing class where you can prefect and better your work, whether it be in a local writing school, or via an online writing course. And once you’ve done that, have analyzed, dissected, reconsidered and rewritten your work, turn your script in for coverage (www.scriptshark.com), gather professional feedback, and keep rewriting from there.
When you have sufficiently collected feedback and refined your screenplay until your hair has been torn out and you are blue in the face, you are, hopefully, prepared. Your work is strong and thought-out. Your plot, characters, scenes and themes work. You are prepared for all the spoilers. And you have not left any loose ends. So… What do you do next?
Time to set out on your professional search. Switch hats from WRITER to PROMOTER, and go about securing representation for the material you spent so long perfecting for the marketplace. Our advice: Take your emotions out of it. Go about it methodically and in a business-like fashion. No rejection is personal. And no closed door is there for the simple purpose of making you feel rejected. So it’s up to you to learn how the industry works.
First, you must become familiar with the industry’s landscape. Ask such questions as: What is the difference between an agent and a manager? What are CE’s and DOD’s, and how does one get to them? Such questions, and a lot more, will be addressed in future Scriptshark articles. For this publication, we would like to focus on the topic of acquiring representation.
Not too long ago, the query letter was a standard, acceptable format to contact, and (with any luck) secure, representation for a screenwriter making his way in the entertainment industry. A query letter is a 1-page introduction of the writer and the completed screenplays they currently have available, offering the agent or manager an opportunity to investigate their work. However, in recent years, both in our one-on-one business interactions and in the professional industry panels that we have sat on and moderated, we have learned from agents and managers that query letters, in most cases, no longer work. There are simply too many writers out there sending out too many query letters, and no established manager or agent ever seems to get through them. Additionally, as becoming a writer and sending out a query later does not require any prior experience or success, many agents and managers find that most of the queries that make it to their desks are written by unprepared, first-time novices who fashion themselves professional writers without ever having written a professional-grade screenplay, or honing their work. Therefore, finding a market-ready screenwriter in a pile of hundreds of query letters is not unlike finding a very fine needle in a very colossal haystack. Therefore, unless a manager or an agent is just starting out and focusing on building their client roster, query letters will likely get tossed in the trash as soon as they have been received at their destination.
So how does an unknown writer get an agent? It is important to remember that all of Hollywood’s successful writers were unknown writers once upon a time. So if they can do it, as long as you have a stand-out screenplay, there is no reason why you can’t.
Screenwriting Contests have become a popular avenue for agents and managers to discover new talent. Though a screenwriting contest may receive hundreds or even thousand of sub-par submissions from all over the world, the cream does rise to the top, and the list of finalists in any industry-oriented contest is sure to pique an agent’s or manager’s interest. Industry contests often produce success stories. For example, Nicole Jones, winner of Scriptshark’s 2005 Insider Competition, has recently signed for representation with industry powerhouse Metropolitan Talent Agency, who is in the process of setting up her prize-winning project, PRISON OF THE DAMNED, with a prominent production company. Additionally, one of the finalists for the Nashville Screenwriting Competition was signed by successful manager Colin O’Reilly, who, following a few pivotal rewrites, will begin sending the finalist screenplay out to industry executives. Therefore, it is up to you to identify the contest that are most attractive to you (we recommend contests that offer not only cash prizes, but rather direct exposure to the entertainment industry), set your annual contest budget, and enter your screenplay systematically into contests throughout the year. If, in time, you realize that your script is never placing as a finalist, you may have to revisit your work, and consider a rewrite. But we don’t recommend that you do so until you have submitted to at least six competition. A good source for locating comprehensive lists of annual screenwriting competitions are moviebytes.com (http://moviebytes.com/) and donedeal.com (http://www.scriptsales.com/).
Another, and perhaps the single most trusted, way in which agents and managers locate new talent is referrals. Referrals can come from a myriad of insider industry sources: An agent’s assistant. A reader. A producer with whom a manager is friendly. Scriptshark.com, a professional scouting service, which has built its stellar reputation with the industry’s leading agents and managers by identifying promising new talent. Because you never know where a referral source may emerge from, it is important that you keep your eyes open, and are always prepared. You may run into someone who could read your work and know someone to refer you to at your local coffee shop. Equally, you could meet them at a writing conference, or on an online writer’s forum. Therefore, it is important that you remain inquisitive, positive, but never become too pushy. Don’t tout yourself as the greatest undiscovered writer in Hollywood. Trust that your work, and your charm, will open doors by speaking for themselves, whether it be when securing the support of a prominent agent’s assistant you just met, or engaging scriptshark.com for its scouting services. Remember: The people who will be convincing their bosses that you are a writer worth meeting, or using their established connections to tout your work, need to know that you are a level-headed business professional, who will be easy to work with and pleasant to be around, on top of being a stellar writer with a strong body of work. Therefore, it is important to remain professional at every step along the way.
The bottom line is that, despite the elimination of such avenues as the once-trusted query letter, if your script is good enough, and you are diligent and consistent about submitting your screenplay to contests, as well as networking, receiving professional coverage, perfecting your screenplay until it qualifies for scouting services, and always looking to better your work, you will get noticed. Remember, not everyone will see your vision or love your screenplays. All it takes is finding the one agent or manager who will see the potential in your work, and start working with you at making all of your Hollywood dreams happen. All you have to do now is find them.
Good luck!
If you have any questions relating to this article, please email them to scriptshark@filmtracker.com, and we will do our best to address them.
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Biography:
MIKE FIGGIS
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With his roots in experimental theater and music, it is perhaps surprising that Kenyan-born writer-director Mike Figgis started out as such a conventional filmmaker, but his dissatisfaction with the Hollywood studio system eventually led to his true calling as one of the most innovative auteurs working in contemporary cinema.
After studying music in London, he became a member of Gas Board, an English rhythm-and-blues band (which also featured a pre-fame Bryan Ferry), and later went on tour for nearly a decade with an experimental theater group The People Show first as a musician, then also as an actor. Undaunted by his unsuccessful application to London's National Film School, Figgis began writing and directing his own stage productions, visually striking works like "Redheugh", "Slow Fade" and "Animals of the City", which combined music with filmed segments and live performance. He developed "Slow Fade" into a one-hour piece ("The House") for Britain's Channel 4, capturing the attention of producer David Puttnam, for whom he wrote a treatment that would become his feature writing-directing debut, "Stormy Monday" (1988)".
Although Puttnam would pass on the project, Figgis did finally get backing for his tale set in the seamy world of Newcastle jazz clubs. The atmospheric homage to Hollywood film noir featured a score by the director, who also persuaded B.B. King to record the title track, a career first for the great bluesman. His impressive American debut, "Internal Affairs" (1990), was a striking portrait of police corruption featuring powerhouse performances by a creepy silver-haired Richard Gere and a seething Andy Garcia. The studio demanded control over the music and chose two composers to help execute Figgis' vision, even though he had already done a temporary track to accompany the film. His follow up, "Liebestraum" (1991), made precious little sense--something about a 40-year-old sex scandal, corruption, and family madness--but had style to spare, and with Brit backing, he was able to write his own score, a more or less "wall-to-wall" affair, often almost inaudible but always a presence. Figgis then tangled with the studio and producers who insisted that "Mr. Jones" (1993), a change-of-pace romance with Gere as a manic depressive charmer who gets involved with his psychiatrist (Lena Olin), be more upbeat. "I thought it was a ludicrous idea," he told The New York Times (November 1, 1995). "Manic-depression isn't something to dismiss lightly."
Once again a hired gun on the well-mounted, though stodgy remake of "The Browning Version" (1994), Figgis was at the creative center of his next project, "Leaving Las Vegas" (1995), and acquired foreign financing to protect the integrity of his noirish character study of an alcoholic, suicidal screenwriter (Nicolas Cage in an Oscar-winning turn) and his relationship with an abused prostitute (Elisabeth Shue). The actors and director took virtually no money, and Figgis began his love affair with the cheaper, grittier, "more impressionistic" Super 16 film (later blown up to 35 mm) normally used in documentaries, perfectly capturing the seamy trappings of the powerful love story. He also composed the score, and Sting, who had starred in "Stormy Monday", volunteered to sing on the soundtrack. When the movie opened, he had no expectations for commercial success, but "Leaving Las Vegas" became a critical darling, earning him the best reviews of his career as well as two Oscar nominations for Best Director and Best Adapted Screenplay.
After serving as executive producer of Annette Haywood-Carter's "Foxfire" (1996), Figgis then produced his own "One Night Stand" (1997), which he extensively rewrote from a Joe Eszterhas script (so much so that Eszterhas took no credit). Despite a too pat ending, it continued to show him as a filmmaker firmly in control, expertly matching his moody score to his complex take on relationships and reassessing life choices. His next film, "The Loss of Sexual Innocence" (1999), may have completed a trilogy of sexual obsession and human frailty begun with "Leaving Las Vegas", but it was also a labor of love 17 years in the making. Rejecting the linear three-act structure ("the filmmaker's Bible"), Figgis presented a fragmented narrative relying more on music and images than dialogue, intercutting a coming-of-age tale with the Adam and Eve story. His ambitious attempt to restore art to the medium was his most personal film yet and, despite its problems, successfully demanded audience participation in a way few pictures can. Like the preceding two films, it featured improvisation, energetic camera work and a fearlessness to delve into the human psyche that had become the director's trademark.
Figgis continued his experimentation with "Miss Julie" (also 1999), an adaptation of August Strindberg's 19th-century play about sexual obsession, filming in 16mm in 16 days on one set with two hand-held cameras. His decision to split the screen and show the love scene from both camera perspectives prefigured the four-camera point-of-view he would employ on "Time Code" (2000), arguably his most innovative picture to date. Working only from an outline, he equipped his actors with digital watches, and as they hit their prescribed marks at the prearranged times, he followed the action with four hand-held digital video cameras, shooting the entire 93-minute movie in one complete take. Though there were multiple takes, Figgis eschewed editing, opting to simultaneously show the images from all four cameras of what he deemed the best take. The director drew inspiration from the Dogma '95 movement and from the success of "The Blair Witch Project" (1999) to come up with this seminal work of the digital revolution, and the actors involved embraced its guerilla aspect. "This is the most incredible experience I've ever had--and the most stressful," Selma Hayek told the Los Angeles Times (November 8, 1999). "Nothing is really set. And there is no room for mistake. The danger of it, the experimental quality of it, really turned me on."
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Development Snapshot
New projects in D at the studios:
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John Sapahits |
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Joel Silver |
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Warner Bros. |
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Silver Pictures |
| Logline: The viability of earth is threatened and a space marine is recruited to help terraform an alien planet for human colonization, only to discover that he hasn't been given the complete story. |
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A$$HOLE!: HOW I GOT RICH & HAPPY BY NOT GIVING A F#@% ABOUT YOU |
Writer: |
Marty Kihn |
Producer: |
Danielle Sanchez |
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Spring Creek Productions |
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Warner Bros. |
| Logline: The transformation of a sweet guy to complete jerk who gets promoted at work after his change in personality. |
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NORWAND |
Director: |
Philipp Stoezl |
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Philipp Stoezl, Johannes Naber, Christoph Silber, Benedikt Roskau |
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Senator Entartainment |
Logline: Set in 1936, centers around four mountain climbers who attempt to climb the north face of the Eiger Mountain in Switzerland and the tragic events that follow.
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